Hmmm
Having used stick figures and did quite a bad job on it at that ... your stick figures kick butt ^_^. Indifferent on the action, though. Some seemed .. short. Yes, repeat of before that it felt more like a preview than chapter 1, so I won't say anymore on that. The stick vampire looekd sweeeet. LOVE the fangs. Usually peopel draw these long toothpicks and say there's a vamp. ah, YOU did a vamp. And a stick figure one that looekd good to boot.
PS: LOVE the bike and weaponry. Pick a better song next time, though.